Very cute in the beginning, had some nice build up. This story definitely did what it intended to do, that’s for sure.

My only real complaint is how they got together felt… awkward to me. There was also some awkward wording, strange lines that made me cringe and took me out of the fantasy. That wouldn’t be so bad if it wasn’t for the fact this is so short so those little moments definitely stick out to me.

Overall, not bad for what it is.