I feel like the bones are here, it had a good structure of a good story, but it just needed a little more… soul? It’s hard to explain.

Bland is the best way I can describe this story. Nothing felt emotional or real, it was just… blah… Very telling instead of showing. Characters’ emotions were rarely mentioned. There was one part of just endless back and forth dialogue without anything else, not even a “she said” or anything. And that’s fine if it’s just a few lines, but not like pages worth of that.

2 stars instead of 1 because it does have the bones! The ideas were there! It just needed some flesh and some soul.