This one was leagues above the first one! Though it’s technically a little shorter, the pace of the story was slower and I felt we connected with the characters much better. I like their personalities and how they mixed together, made the spicy scene great as well. There was a good focus on them just talking to each other, bonding in different ways, and that also made the spicy scene more enjoyable.

Great writing! Short, sweet, exciting, and intriguing!